You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
You need to: 1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each 2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work 3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what research you carried out and some inspirations you took on board, as well as explaining how your products will appeal to you TA. You need to elaborate more on who you think elements used conform to the indie genre, and how the audience will be able to build a relationship with your artist more.
You have provided a basic understanding and analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what decisions were made and why to an extent, but not elaborating on where ideas were taken from, or how you came to a final decision.
ReplyDeleteYou need to:
1) Explain clearly what type of research was carried out for each
2) Explain what ideas you took on board from this research and how/why you incorporated it into your own work
3) Elaborate on why you think your final products are successful in appealing to your target audience
You have provided a proficient analysis of your ancillary texts, explaining what research you carried out and some inspirations you took on board, as well as explaining how your products will appeal to you TA.
ReplyDeleteYou need to elaborate more on who you think elements used conform to the indie genre, and how the audience will be able to build a relationship with your artist more.